Quick response to Kelly's JU Writers challenge

Published on January 13, 2007 By dynamaso In Writing

This is my response to Kelly's latest JU Writers challenge... Link

He:

Oh, Odin’s goddess, proud lover of the sea,

Take you up an axe so you might set me free

To roam with you across living seagrass plains

Where tides will no more wash over my wooden remains

Oh, Neptune’s daugher, a small favour is all I seek

Take me to your depths before I am made too weak

I long to hold you close, as close as you can bear

The tree inside has died but will live again under your care

She:

Oh, you seasoaked figurehead, yours is a useless plight

Tis not for you to decide your love for me is right

I only came to pass you by upon you once more

To see if the stubborn rocks had released you from the shore

Oh, you silly figurehead, you could never be with me

Have you ever heard of a piece of wood living under the sea

Nor for that matter, a river, stream or moat

Don’t you know the simplest thing, that all dead wood floats?

Comments (Page 2)

dynamaso

on Jan 14, 2007

Tova,

I'd be happy to buy a copy

As it is our first CD, we're giving them away to anyone who asks. It is a good way for us to promote our music. Oh, and I will make sure it is autographed. Whose signature would you like?

uDigItTheMost,

Hey, mate, good to see you. I'm glad I've inspired you to get your ass into gear. I'm looking forward to seeing what you come up with.

Uhmm, did I send Rose and you a copy of the above-mentioned CD? If I didn't, let me know and I'll forward you one as well.

KellyW0498

on Jan 15, 2007

Hey, we want an autographed copy of the CD!

Me and my boys loved the songs we heard.

dynamaso

on Jan 15, 2007

Kelly,

I thought I'd already sent you one. That would be me getting forgetful... There is one coming to you too then.

I'm glad you and the boys liked it.

foreverserenity

on Jan 19, 2007

I liked it too. Well done Mark!

Tova7

on Jan 19, 2007

As it is our first CD, we're giving them away to anyone who asks. It is a good way for us to promote our music. Oh, and I will make sure it is autographed. Whose signature would you like?

Your autograph of course!

I am looking forward to it. In fact, have you all considered sending some copies to college radio stations? I know while in college I worked my station and played just about anything that came in that I liked.

Just somthing to think about.

dynamaso

on Jan 19, 2007

Donna,

Thanks for the comment and your ongoing support. Much appreciated...

Tova,

Your autograph of course

Yeah, I know, I was trying to be funny without using those darned emoticons. Thanks for the college radio idea too. It is something we have considered. We're waiting to get decent covers printed before we send anything out but will most certainly take up the idea. Thanks again...

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