Take a number and wait until you're called.
Published on March 27, 2007 By dynamaso In Poetry
It is a great distance for a single man to cover
Between being alone in the world to taking a lover
The intimacy required is never easily expressed
Those words she longs to hear have long been suppressed

He walks in circles tongue tied and lost
The emotions he feels he knows come at a cost
He only wants it to be simple, straightforward and easy
Like in his dreams, where she is both pure and porn sleazy

He is rudderless in an ocean of open displays of affection
Of smells and of tastes and of jealous over-protection
The impact it has changes every aspect of his life
Until he grows to understand she’s his friend as well as his wife

It is expectations he has never before had to control
He never understood his part until he became part of the a whole

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on Apr 08, 2007
The love of a parent for a sick child for one. These relationships are as loving you get.


So true, so true. But this king of giving isn't seen by the giver as a sacrifice at all. Never let your left hand know what your right is doing and all that. Good points all!   
on Apr 08, 2007
Good points all!

   agreed! It's nice to get the last word in, isn't it?  
on Apr 08, 2007
But this king of giving


oops! Typo there! Shoulda read kind

(and...last word! haha!   )
on Apr 08, 2007
Abe,

what is given up when we enter a loving relationship?


Interesting question. I think we all sacrafice something of our singledom to enter a relationship. I don't see the sacrafice as a sign of insecurity but more as an offering, an appeasement, if you will. In this way we allow ourselves to grow and move forward in partnership.

As to the question of what we sacrafice, I think this is very individual. I know what I gave up but I'm sure Don or Shovel or anyone else reading this would probably have their own ideas.

I think you poem is a lot more powerful when the sentences are read from last to first


Wow, it does change the perspective, doesn't it?

Don/Shovel,

Thanks to you both for keeping this alive. Easter has kept me busy and away from here. You both make some particularly salient points. Thanks...

The love that parents have for a chronically sick or terminally sick children, for example


Excellent point, Don. How huge is the sacrafice people in these situations make?
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