The Detritus Of My Mind » Planting Bitter Crops

Published on February 11, 2008 By dynamaso In Poetry

I descend
Under condescension
Broken-eyed
And watering a storm
You defend
An untenable position
Sowing bitterness
Like seeded corn

I decline
A callous invitation
Into arguments
You’ve angrily drawn
Instead suggesting
Self-copulation
If you could find
A bone to be worn

Comments

RoyLevosh

on Feb 12, 2008

Wow, bitter is right!

Instead suggesting
Self-copulation

Boy, have I heard THAT before -although a little more crudely put.

dynamaso

on Feb 12, 2008

Wow, bitter is right!

I don't know where it came from as I am not the slightest bit bitter about anything. Isn't it marvellous the way our subconciousness works?

a little more crudely put

There are many ways to say it, but I still think the most effective is probably the crudest.

foreverserenity

on Feb 12, 2008

Isn't it marvellous the way our subconciousness works?

More than we know!

dynamaso

on Feb 12, 2008

More than we know

Indeed...

uDigItTheMost

on Feb 14, 2008

Good work, mate.

I know how you feel but there's no way I could say it as well as you just did.

dynamaso

on Feb 14, 2008

Ah, yes, poetic licence often leaves a lot unsaid and not understood but in this case, I think I got it right. Glad you liked it, mate.

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