Next Challenge for the JU Writers Club

Thanks Shovelheat for providing this...

Published on November 16, 2006 By dynamaso In Writing

I've been really overwhelmed by the response to the JU Writers Club so far. Thanks to everyone for your support. We've had some fantastic short pieces already and I can hardly wait to see what you all think of next.

To that end, Shovel has suggested a picture to provide inspiration. In true Shovel form, it is risque and should, erm, stimulate imaginations well. Following is the link to the picture he suggested: Link

I'm still waiting to hear back from Admin about the problem I have creating a blog group. Until then, I think both BlueDev and Xythe's suggestion of posting a link on this back to the individual's page with the story is probably the best way to go.

Thanks again to everyone for your participation so far. You guys and gals rock

Comments (Page 2)

Xythe

on Nov 17, 2006

It did not work for me either...I'm just clever

dynamaso

on Nov 17, 2006

I'm just clever

So you say

Shovelheat

on Nov 17, 2006

THAT'S IT! Way to go Xythe...

(ya'll got to admit: it IS an intriguing pic, huh?)

Dr Guy

on Nov 17, 2006

The Picture is inspiring! About writing..............eh?

Zoologist03

on Nov 17, 2006

Frankly, I don't know what to write...I mean, it's a lovely picture and all...I just can't keep the male thoughts under control and I'm going to end up writing porn. I need to find at least one quality I can focus on...hmm...

~Zoo

dynamaso

on Nov 17, 2006

Shovel,

it IS an intriguing pic, huh?

Well, intriguing is one way to put it. You could also say stimulating, envigorating, provocative or memorable

Doc,

About writing...

Go on, give it a go, mate.

can't keep the male thoughts under control

Hey, Zoo, have a cold shower first

But seriously, I'm sure you'll think of something,

foreverserenity

on Nov 17, 2006

! That's quite a picture! Pretty er....interesting and very stimulating for you guys uh?!

!

If I write something it will be very, very interesting......

I'll be back!

Zoologist03

on Nov 17, 2006

I'm sure you'll think of something,

Hmm...maybe a hot sexy poem...hmm...we'll see.

~Zoo

foreverserenity

on Nov 17, 2006

OK, so I wrote what I thought when I see the picture. Of course it could have been a bit more risque, but I decided to keep it clean!

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“No! No, no, no….” Carey screamed, writhing and trying to pull away from the indignity being forced on her! She squirmed but that seemed to only excite her captors even more. Brunhilda smiled quite knowingly. “Yes you little tart, keep on doing that and I’ll show you a thing or two. Don’t mind me being on top, I like being on top in fact!” She smirked at Carey, tipping the bottle fully into Carey’s mouth, forcing her to take it all in.

Carey swallowed, she didn’t like swallowing, but she couldn’t help it! “Oh if only I had listen to my mother” she thought, “I shouldn’t have come to this retched place with Ingrid, I wouldn’t be in this predicament now!” Being accused of stealing money and cocaine….cocaine! Of all the insanity! She was a good girl, she did what she was told when she was told to, and she followed every rule so as not to get in trouble! Now here she was being manhandled by a she-man! “Ugh”!

MasonM

on Nov 17, 2006

Oh, ummmm, Hi Mom and Dad.

dynamaso

on Nov 20, 2006

Carey swallowed, she didn’t like swallowing, but she couldn’t help it!

I don't know whether you were trying to be funny, but this line tickled me no end.

Being accused of stealing money and cocaine….cocaine! Of all the insanity!

I'd really like to know how she got in this predicament.

If you don't mind some unsolicited advice, character dialogue 'should' be broken into separate lines for each character. It saves any confusion on behalf of the reader (not that there was any here, but it could be useful for the future).

foreverserenity

on Nov 20, 2006

I don't know whether you were trying to be funny, but this line tickled me no end.

Oh yeah, all the puns were intended!

I'd really like to know how she got in this predicament.

She was 'blind' to her friend's ways and in that rebellious attitude fell right in! This was just a snippet that I thought or hoped someone would have continued.....

If you don't mind some unsolicited advice, character dialogue 'should' be broken into separate lines for each character. It saves any confusion on behalf of the reader (not that there was any here, but it could be useful for the future).

Not at all! Thanks, I'll try to remember this!

foreverserenity

on Nov 20, 2006

Oh, ummmm, Hi Mom and Dad.

M, I think this is hilarious!

! I can just see mom and dad's face.

Tova7

on Nov 20, 2006

I just can't get stoked about this picture. My mind just isn't there right now. But is anyone else (besides FS) writing on it because I haven't seen anything.

(Side note: I am still looking for a t shirt dyno. Our sports store has two in stock and they were pretty girly. I'll let ya know when I get it so you can send me an address.)

SanChonino

on Nov 20, 2006

But is anyone else (besides FS) writing on it because I haven't seen anything.

I'm working on it . . . and painfully drawing a bit of a blank.

As salacious a picture as it is, I'm having difficulties . . .

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