A good one to fire off Valentine's day, Maso! And excellent as always. Wished I could do the poetry thing.  

Your creativity continues to amaze...

I loved how it was wonderful...tragic, then wonderful again.


me too.

Perfectly put Kelly.

Dyno, you may just make me start to like poetry (a little bit).

But for some reason when I read your stuff, I always hear a beat in the back ground. So its more like lyrics...and I like those!

Maso, your poetry is direct yet subtle and profound.
A salad of sensation, emotion, obsession and irony. Loved it. You must be quite the composer in your band.
I remember, as a young man, sometimes seeing a lady walking down the street and feeling that kind imperative torment. How vulnerable, we men.

Maybe I'm outa line here, but are you insane, man? You write nothing BUT poetry. You need to hear that!   

I love the title!

I enjoyed the description and the twist in who the angel is!

"Hell's minions...."it was an interesting addition! I would have liked to see more of where this would have taken me!

I like it!

Great! The perfect length too! A home run!

Moskowitz

I am really annoyed. I spent a while responded to all your wonderful comments and then JoeUser decided it was going to glitch and I lost the response. Suffice to say, I thanked you all very much for your responses. I can't remember exactly what I said and I don't really have the time to go through them all again, but there are a couple of things I want to say to a few of you.

First of all,

Tova,



I have to say it was something you said by way of encouragement that has continued me on this poetic odyssey.

Buddah,



I was never much good with a bat but with encouragement like this, I will continue to swing

I like it alot. It perfectly described my teen years ... unfortunately.

Chris,

I like it alot

Thanks mate. It was one of those instantly written poems. My Muse gave it to me and I wrote it down, no edits or drafts of any sort.

Hey Maso,

I wanted to comment on your blog, "Wholly Sole", but it was whacky at the end of the comment box.
I just found it today. I loved it and the point of view of the homeless guy. It does make you think a bit about the person and why they are where they are.

Loved it.

Kelly,

Thanks very much for your continued support. I enjoyed writing it. I'm waiting to see what others might write too. Some of the responses so far have been really clever.

I don't know what happened to the comments at the end of the article. Something went real screwy there.

As always, it is good to hear from you.

just a quick note to say I'm still reading -fantastic stuff Maso! PLEASE keep it up..   



and that goes for you too, Kelly! POST SOMETHING!   

Oh, I intend to, mate, when I can find the time. Thanks for your support, my friend.