Very vivid, Mark. Hits almost all the senses. Nice.

Rose,



Thanks very much. Glad you liked it.

Whoo. Very, very vivid and luscious.

Great stuff mate!

This is great! Good work!

...ahh the torments of passion. I'm seeing an ant-pattern in your writing. I'm wondering whether these are reminiscences? Perhaps of a past life? Thanks for your special way of seeing things. Loved it.
- Don

San Chonino,



Thanks again, mate.

Adnauseam



Thank you, mate.

Buddah,



And thanks to you too. Again, your book has provided me with not only good reading and pondering but inspiration as well.

Don

First of all,



Thanks for this. Now, to answer your question, a lot of what I write is based on memories but a lot of it is fiction. Words and wordplay fascinates me and I enjoy writing immensely.

Whip,

Thanks again...

It shows, Mark. Well done ... again.

Chris,

Well done ... again

Thanks very much, mate. I'm looking forward to your next too.

It shows, Mark. Well done ... again.

Ditto on this! Lovely Mark! BTW...for a moment there I thought the title was - "Love as Fornication"!!

Serenity,

Love as Fornication

Yeah, I was wondering who might pick up on that... Hmm, trust you

Yeah, I was wondering who might pick up on that... Hmm, trust you

! Eyes for the details...sometimes!

Serenity,

Eyes for the details

Details... Yeah, right

Another Maso master piece!

(trying to get caught up here!)

I'd like to say 'Poetry...hmph!"

But I can't. I'll begrudgingly admit it's actually not bad.