Take a number and wait until you're called.
Published on June 9, 2007 By dynamaso In Poetry
I wrote the following about 6 months ago but I've been sitting on it, adjusting it slightly, dusting off every now and then before putting it away again. I'm still not sure about it. It is very niave, but how I feel, in a lot of respects, about the birth of Christianity. I think the best I can call it my extremely limited, niave study of the hypocrisy of organised relgiions.

They captured the speakers of the Word
Had them flagellated
Without any consideration
Not discussed nor debated

Over bones they picked and chose
Called the rest apocryphal
Writing It was a reverent art
Hiding truth in obtuse style

They gathered non-believers
Forced from them dirty confessions
Tortured and crucified all as heretics
Then left them as gory lessons

At no time did they seek
Guidance from those who knew
Just blazed their crooked pathes
Leaving behind but few

Today the Word is Gospel
To those who can afford
The faith of blind belief
Without benefit of knowing the Lord

Don’t ask me if I believe
Far too much blood is still being spilt
To me it is the same blood
On which this Word was built

Don’t ask what I believe
My soul will never wilt
I have no need for archaic faith
Nor a life with needless guilt

Comments
on Jun 09, 2007
Fascinating analysis of the effect of organized religion.

Interesting.
on Jun 09, 2007
This is a really insightful read.
on Jun 09, 2007
This is a really insightful read.


I agree. But then I've always found you to be an insightful person, Maso. (wished it would rub off on me!)
on Jun 10, 2007
Sancho,

Thanks mate. I'm not trying to pick holes or say organised religions are wrong but I know I don't fit in any of them because I can't help but continually see hypocrisy in the major religious domains.

Rose,

Thanks so much for the insightful nod. Much appreciated...

Shovel,

Thanks to you too, mate. I think we have a mutual rub-off society going here... (Okay, that reads a lot worse than it sounds )