Take a number and wait until you're called.
Published on January 22, 2008 By dynamaso In Poetry
Down in the yard there’s a spot on the ground
Where not even bindi-eyes will grow
That’s where the old dog will surely be found
When summer is high and the hot winds blow

It is said there is a doorway buried under there
And beneath it, stairs leading down
It doesn’t explain why people come and stare
But might explain the darkness that hangs over town

So I took to the dirt with the Lord in my heart
And with a mattock and shovel in my hands
I knew I couldn’t stop once I made a start
Nor could I hush those whispered demands

The compressed dirt was hard as cement
But the more I threw myself at it the more came loose
All the while as I dug the day came and went
Yet I couldn’t use nightfall as a cessation excuse

The mound I created grew higher and higher
And as I dug down I felt a strange disconnection
The rush of thoughts I had began to expire
While my body kept at its laborious intention

The hole was so deep I could barely throw out the dirt
Then all of sudden the mattock broke through
I hunkered down to look, wiped my face with my shirt
And as I watched, the hole grew and grew

A feeling fell over me like a cool linen sheet
And I shivered inside despite being parched dry
Then a voice filled with so much unearthly delight
Called out my name and I couldn’t help but cry

I frantically dug at the ever-enlarging hole
Using my hands to throw the soil far and wide
Then I felt something blast me through to my soul
The coward in me wanted to run and hide

I heard the old dog baying at the moon above
The sound was bedevilled and forlorn
As I slipped in the hole like a finger in a glove
I wondered if I’d ever see the dawn

I fell for what felt like the merest of seconds
And landed in something cold, wet and rank
It was then I was realised the voice I heard
Was my own echoing around an old septic tank

So let this serve as a lesson to you all
Don’t let your suspicions get the better of you
Cause if you keep digging, you just might fall
And end up in an age-old shit stew

Comments
on Jan 22, 2008

That was the most elegant shit joke I believe I've ever read.  Nice job!

~Zoo

on Jan 22, 2008
Thanks Zoo, glad you liked it.
on Jan 30, 2008
Wow! Mark, I'm must reading it and Wow, what a story! I like it. I couldn't wait to get to the end to see how you would end it! Nice job! You've got talent, but you know that already!!
on Jan 30, 2008
Serenity,

Thanks very much. It is pretty long and the punchline is a little weak but I like it too. Good to see you...